These days More and more shops opens long hours
What are its Positive and negative developments ?
The procurement of products has gone higher to render a quality goods to consumer. The amount of shops opening for long-lasting hours in these days are widely increasing. In this essay I will provide a personal, professional development in positive manner and for negative manner is health issues.
Perhaps the most compelling reason for shops to open for long hours is personal ways. The job, which they are working in the store is a permanent business. In this business people going to sell their products to consumers with reasonable prices. These selling could make them a good income without any sceptical. Those profits could save them from paid marketing for their business,while they opens a new business branch. That branch growth could be result in wealthy, affluent and multi-crore.
Secondly, the personal way business not be viewed in isolation. Another significant way of business is professional way. These business will have bolster from government for helping people. For example, if the business holders hire someone, there will be a business expansion. They will be able to provide huge employment opportunities, to open their shops till long hours, that able to result in more financials for business as well as for country.
However, positive development is not only sector that to be aware off. There is a negative development that gives more impact on people who runs their business: stress levels will increase; work-life could imbalance; business loss would be unpredictable; and the most important impact on health issues, that could effect their family.
In conclusion, to maintain business long-lasting the best solution is to hire employees. This would lead to better growth and good financials. To overcome negative development taking care of our health is the key factor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'good'?
Suggestion: good
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...m from paid marketing for their business,while they opens a new business branch. That ...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'open'
Suggestion: open
...marketing for their business,while they opens a new business branch. That branch grow...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bolstered'.
Suggestion: bolstered
...fessional way. These business will have bolster from government for helping people. For...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... expansion. They will be able to provide huge employment opportunities, to open t...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ant impact on health issues, that could effect their family. In conclusion, to maint...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28819444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83057250772 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552083333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0896554204 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1578947368 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209205927334 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590264473155 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068530911436 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122572756833 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540357277654 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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