The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
In the letter to the editor of the central Plaza , the businessman has claimed that the their business has been decreased and that is due to skateboard users. They have claimed that because of increased skateboard user their business has been decreased. However before this recommendation can be clearly evaluated the following question must be answered.
Firstly, Are the skateboard users causing any trouble to the customers? There is no clear sign that the customers in the plaza has been troubled by the skateboard users. It may happen that the skate board user has facilitated they way of coming to the Central plaza. May be the only way to coming to the market was before by means of foot. May be due to the uses of skateboard the way to come to house has been facilitated. If the scenario above is true then the argument drawn by the businessman is significantly weakened.
Secondly, Are the people feeling safe coming to the Plaza for shopping? It may be possible that people are not feeling as safe as they were before. Cause we see that there is increase in the number of littering and vandalism in the market. People may have stopped coming to the market due increase amount of vandalism and littering. If the above mention scenario is true then it cast doubt on plan the businessmen has described.
Thirdly, Is there any new plaza which has facilitate the customer more than the Central plaza? May be there have opened a new plaza nearby, which is giving discount on taking new shop there and offering it customer monthly lottery and prize for their shopping. If it offers people with same quality and same quantity of product with less amount of prize than people will go there. If this proposal above is true then the argument the businessman made doesn't hold the water.
If the author of the passage is able answer the above mentioned questioned and offer more supporting evidence regarding the argument then it will be possible evaluate the recommendation the businessman made that is to prohibit skateboarder in Central plaza.
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- The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner."Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Ce 46
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 352 350
No. of Characters: 1664 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.727 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.546 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 82 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.526 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.754 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.789 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...etter to the editor of the central Plaza , the businessman has claimed that the th...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...laza , the businessman has claimed that the their business has been decreased and that is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...user their business has been decreased. However before this recommendation can be clear...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...way of coming to the Central plaza. May be the only way to coming to the market wa...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to come to house has been facilitated. If the scenario above is true then the arg...
^^
Line 9, column 334, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ease amount of vandalism and littering. If the above mention scenario is true then...
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Line 13, column 43, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'facilitated'.
Suggestion: facilitated
...irdly, Is there any new plaza which has facilitate the customer more than the Central plaz...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...unt of prize than people will go there. If this proposal above is true then the ar...
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Line 13, column 452, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... then the argument the businessman made doesnt hold the water. If the author of t...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...essman made doesnt hold the water. If the author of the passage is able answe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 351.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87749287749 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61294457248 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450142450142 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2498378778 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1052631579 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184026880335 0.218282227539 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651165648693 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739627580862 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11313649308 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501089243521 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.3799401198 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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