The flow chart below shows the procedure to get a driving license in the US. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the licensing procedure for drivers.
it can be seen that the process consist of many steps and it seem that those steps are not easy to pass.
Firstly, the one who wants to get a driver license must go to the license center, and fill in the forms. Then an eyesight test will be taken place to make sure the capability of sight when driving. if pass, candidate pays fee to take a written exam. if not, it means the candidate fails, and there is no license.
After taken the written exam, the driver will continue to do the road exam, if he or she pass the written one. passing the road exam, driver will be licensed, if not, driver has to pay fees and restart the exams.
if the candidates failed the written exam at first, they can retake it the second time, and even the third time without paying fees. if they pass during the second written test, they will go straight for the road exam. it also the same if they pass at the third time retake the written test. However, if candidates failed the third written test, they will have to pays fees and restart the exams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...e licensing procedure for drivers. it can be seen that the process consist of...
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Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...he process consist of many steps and it seem that those steps are not easy to pass. ...
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Suggestion: If
...e the capability of sight when driving. if pass, candidate pays fee to take a writ...
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Suggestion: If
...didate pays fee to take a written exam. if not, it means the candidate fails, and ...
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Suggestion: Passing
...xam, if he or she pass the written one. passing the road exam, driver will be licensed,...
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Suggestion: If
...to pay fees and restart the exams. if the candidates failed the written exam ...
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Suggestion: If
...ven the third time without paying fees. if they pass during the second written tes...
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Suggestion: It
...hey will go straight for the road exam. it also the same if they pass at the third...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'pay'.
Suggestion: pay
...e third written test, they will have to pays fees and restart the exams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, third, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44607843137 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02556588322 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524509803922 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3682774053 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5833333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0444438264903 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253169747909 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521931608982 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492436210963 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674031208765 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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