Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern society, many people work long shifts and this will leave them with less time for other activities such as leisure. this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having less time for leisure as a result of working long shifts.
On the one hand, working longer shifts is rewarded with more wages, thus it helps the person financially. The activist reason for doing job is to earn money. Even though working longer shifts may result in lack of personal time, the additional income is quite beneficial to life. Due to this reason, many individuals prefer doing longer shifts with the help of gaining better wages which strengthens them financially.
On the other hand, lack of time for leisure may have a detrimental impact on a person's health. it is undeniable that working long hours is a tiresome work where the person will be physically and mentally exhausted at the end of the shift. Hence, the person needs time to relax. Leisure activities are considered a great way of helping people to relax and refresh them. Documentary by telephone in 2003 revealed how important it is to engage in a leisure activity in order to maintain a better mental and physical health. In that documentary, the scientist explain that leisure activities such as gardening woodworking will have a positive effect on people.
All things considered, it is true that longer shift mein grant the person with more income, but lack of time for leisure activities which refreshes people to be healthy is an obvious drawback. even though there are financial benefits of working longest shifts, the disadvantages. Caused by the lack of time of leisure activities outweigh the aforementioned benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06007067138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70256811934 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2585357215 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234041808677 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876138524999 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662647229677 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163357669004 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712176370156 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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