Staying in a different country with a different language could really be an issue when we don't know that language. The two of the most identified issues with this are social and practical problems.
Firstly I would like to describe the social problems, which is more severe than the other problem. When people unable to talk in the local language, they hesitate to interact with the native peoples. This causes a sense of loneliness and neglected sometimes. And this may lead to mental stress, which can give birth to negative thoughts towards that particular country and its citizens.
On the other hand if we see the practical issues, it can really be tough to perform day to day activities when you in other country where you need to speak their native language. For instance if you want to go to buy a particular item from the market and you have requested the taxi driver to drop you in that market where you can find that item, in that case if you don’t convey the write place to the taxi driver.
However to recapitulate I think it can really cause a serious social and practical problem if you have to live in foreign country where you have to talk in their native language unless you learn that language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65898617512 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39230433876 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543778801843 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1099426269 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432546303593 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15104981474 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15391241091 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260053828572 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176378770463 0.056905535591 310% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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