One can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends that the person has.
The debate between person behavior according to their college or way different than their fellow companion has been proven to be controversial. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad elements should be taken in to consideration in order to access constructive and destructive facets of this issue. some remains intransigent in the view that people behavior can be generalize according to their peripheral people while other take a stance of the opposite view. From my vantage point, I concur that people should not be judge on the basis of their college as the fact that people may have different habits and ideology regardless their surrounding environment.
The first exquisite point to be included is that person may be stick to their main belief most often. Despite the truth that people may influence from their companion, they may not adopt what is the habit of their college. Divergently, within the same group, people may not hold the similar opinion even their most friends internal feelings have apparently same. To show this argument vividly, my personal life has gone through this experience. back in my high school I was surrounded by a lot of people who were addicted to the smoking and alcoholic addiction. However, my case was different than others. I was always resolute about my decision that I would never take cigarette and drinks even their frequent persuasion. By sticking my own decision, I remained different than them. So, just living in same clan does not mean that he/she should have similar opinion and behavior.
Secondly, another reasons that need some words to say is that sometimes people need to entice with the certain people beside their interest. it is not seems possible to stay in the group in where the person feel alike; sometimes they have to compromise with the situation. For instance, I had spent my two years in my life with the guy who was reticent and barely express his feelings. although, my gesture was opposite to him; I like to fond with people who are jubilant and ebullient while he remained lethargic all the time. due to some circumstances, I had to live with him which was hard of course. but, it does not mean that I was like him. In this way, people will around you might not represent all the time and sometimes you may have to make effort to live with them.
Lastly, although the aforementioned view were the first come cross the mind at the first glance. Nevertheless, there may be subtle point that should be included in the context. sometimes people enjoy the company different than self because of their unique character. back in my high school, I also lure to spend some time with one friend while I was free because of his charismatic behavior. may be I was bit attracted by his personality but I was unable as well as well not to simulate him. this incident again clarify people may not be same as their companion even they enjoy the moment.
To sum up, the above mentioned reasons helps to prove how other people around you or friend cannot decide your personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, of course, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2533.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 524.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83396946565 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56796420438 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503816793893 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 792.0 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1327094064 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8148148148 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4074074074 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59259259259 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902369308676 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258090644543 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308755811704 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534353669564 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246737895521 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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