Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Darbie and I am the president of this society. I am writing in reference to the advertisement in your newspaper for offering an award to people who have helped the community.
Mary is a 70 years old retired school teacher and she is residing at 10-Cox-Street, Gora for the past 60 years. Basically, she is a person who always wanting to help others in need, which turns our breakdown to breakthrough.
Firstly, she takes coaching classes for the poor children, at no fees, which enables the children to spread their wings and embrace victory. To add on, she also provides free Yoga classes to the adults and children, for a healthy future.
Based on the awards listed on the newspaper, I believe she will be more suitable to get the "Best Human-being" award.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you
Yours faithfully,
Darbie.
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community sugg 78
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community sugg 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch turns our breakdown to breakthrough. Firstly, she takes coaching classes for ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88970855147 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697368421053 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1845224109 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225688945344 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959463387035 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14414985606 0.0603063233224 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104182502884 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110233206754 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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