You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about some important documents that I might have misplaced while attending a conference at your hotel ‘Le Meridian’ on 26th of April. The conference was held at the ‘Imperial’ banquet hall. I am quite sure that I have left those documents unattended in the above-mentioned banquet hall. All of those documents should be in a black folder with my name ‘Ralph’ written on top of it.
In particular, the documents are of extreme importance to me. They contain all the valuable notes that I took in the course of the meeting that day along with some confidential financial information about my company. Without those documents, I would not be able to submit my upcoming business plan for review.
I would humbly request if you could please ask your staff to conduct a thorough search at the banquet hall. If you find those papers please give me a call on my cell phone at 96666666. I will be more than happy to collect them at the earliest possible time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ralph
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a thorough search at the banquet hall. If you find those papers please give me a ...
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Line 15, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em at the earliest possible time. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98936170213 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08613335805 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3213066155 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203488628799 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068880771922 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640280000415 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121612995872 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648946536908 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.