The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland
The graph illustrates the number of Someland’s people, suffering from X disease, over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that an increasing trend in the number of people, who had X disease, was seen until mid seventies, then this figure remained stable for following 5 years, before dropping to zero in 1990.
At the beginning of the period, a hundred people contracted X disease in this area. this figure remained stable for next 5 years before doubling in 1970. Suddenly, X disease had been raging for a half of decade in someland, with the number of infected people by this illness rising dramatically by 300 cases and reaching a peak of 500 cases in the late 70s.
No changes were reported in this area until 1980. At this time a fortunate event occured, with figure dropping to zero by 1990. X disease eradicated totally in this area, with the number of cases of the disease reamined at zero until the end of given period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., before dropping to zero in 1990. At the beginning of the period, a hundre...
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...ople contracted X disease in this area. this figure remained stable for next 5 years...
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...peak of 500 cases in the late 70s. No changes were reported in this area un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80701754386 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57422888555 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6545176928 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241805330328 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996672854518 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104053824753 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140050348962 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623188265226 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.