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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...en destroyed by humanity. Growth in the worlds population has led to the fact that nee...
^^^^^^
Line 25, column 104, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to farm'.
Suggestion: to farm
...ey began a sedentary lifestyle, learned farming and survived thanks to animals, plants ...
^^^^^^^
Line 37, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ng activities. Food. Growth in the worlds population has led to more meat consump...
^^^^^^
Line 47, column 83, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...oming more popular day by day. Catching a large number of fish leads to their extinction. Also, l...
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Line 67, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...o the atmosphere again. 20% of the worlds population consume 80% of all resources...
^^^^^^
Line 73, column 194, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...onger necessary to think about what is. Lets write a sequel to the story all togethe...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, at least, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 13.1623246493 342% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 140.0 41.998997996 333% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4821.0 1615.20841683 298% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 988.0 315.596192385 313% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87955465587 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.60646656023 4.20363070211 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47678393193 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 476.0 176.041082164 270% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481781376518 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1439.1 506.74238477 284% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 0.809619238477 1359% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 68.0 16.0721442886 423% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6564580222 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8970588235 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54411764706 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 8.67935871743 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 30.0 3.4128256513 879% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 224.0 78.4519038076 286% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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