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About 4 billion years ago the Earth has appeared. 3 thousand years ago the life on the has started. 2 thousand years ago the humanity has appeared. During that time balance in the nature have been destroyed by humanity. Growth in the world's population has led to the fact that needs have increased several times. Daily, several tons of water and oil are used only to feed livestock. The imbalance led to the fact that the glaciers melt at a wrong time and because of this, a significant part of the fresh water flows into the salty seas. Half of the world's forests have already been destroyed. Tons of water will be spent on the production of oil from sand. Every day, 5 million people die due to hunger and lack of water, about the same as in the garbage to survive. Wells in desert zones are exhausted and can no longer be used.
Volcanoes. Volcanoes. Volcanoes are the only "sights" that remind us of what the Earth was like during its inception. Steam emanating from the bowels of the volcano was once an integral part of the atmosphere, an atmosphere that had no oxygen and was rich in carbon dioxide.
Water. But thanks to the water and the unique location of the Earth, everything has changed. Water vapor condensed and heavy rainfall fell to Earth, so rivers appeared. Thanks to the rivers, oceans and valley areas appeared, since the rivers washed away the Earth's surface.
The first life forms. Archeobacteria can still be found in the hot bowels of the Earth. These bacteria live only due to heat, these are the only organisms that are able to absorb the heat of the sun on their own. They are the ancestors of plants, and they decided the fate of the Earth.
Grand Canyon. This place was once the sea in the bowels of which there was carbon dioxide. Over time, dying shells drowned and created these deposits.
The trees. It took about 4 billion years to create the trees of the Earth. Trees are the only plants that defy gravity, and stretch to the top towards the sun. The fallen leaves of the trees rot and form fertile soil on which we all depend.
People. At first, people survived by hunting. But over time, they began a sedentary lifestyle, learned farming and survived thanks to animals, plants and land. Then they created cities, apparently because it was easier to live this way and continued like this until people learned how to extract oil.
Oil. With oil production, people abandoned hard work. Thanks to oil, humanity has gained comfort. And over the next 50 years, the Earth has changed so radically than ever before. Small fishing villages like China have turned into the most powerful states. For 20 years, 3 thousand skyscrapers were built in Shanghai.
New York. New York the first megalopolis city in the world. This city has become a symbol of the Earth’s energy resources. Electricity pushed for the invention of elevators, and this in turn increased the number of skyscrapers. At the moment, it is in 16th place in the economy. It was here that for the first time mezanic machines were introduced into farming activities.
Food. Growth in the world's population has led to more meat consumption. For this purpose, cattle camps were created, where chemical additives, feed and water are delivered daily. As a result, 100 liters of water is spent on growing potatoes, 4000 liters per 1 kg of rice, 13000 liters per 1 kg of meat.
Los-Angeles. This is one of those cities that uses electricity in large quantities. Shows are organized here every night. In addition, almost every resident here has a car, and houses here are built like locks. Following their example, Beijing built houses on the same project. According to calculations, if all countries take the same position, the number of cars could increase to 5 billion.
Dubai. It is a city without natural resources, but they have oil. Thanks to this, Dubai is making a billion dollars on this. Here the impossible has become possible.
Sea creatures. The fishing business is becoming more popular day by day. Catching a large number of fish leads to their extinction. Also, larger animals that live in water also lose their food and die due to hunger.
Desert zones. Because of the scorching sun, the water in the wells located in the desert zones is exhausted, as in India. It has been revealed that 500 million people live here. And in order to feed them in such zones, special fields were created where resources flow through the central pipes.
Swamps. Despite the fact that they were always considered unsuitable for living, people nevertheless mastered from too, creating pastures for livestock or in construction sites.
Deforestation. Half of the world's forests have already been destroyed. It is worth noting that forests up to this point served as a refuge for 3/4 of living creatures on Earth. Trees that were chopped off were used for industrial purposes. Humanity instead of them planted other trees, but these trees have no roots but at the same time they use a lot of water and produce deadly substances.
Glaciers. Due to global warming, glaciers are breaking into icebergs, and the split of glaciers causes even greater warming. If earlier glaciers kept warm in themselves, now they are no longer capable of it, that is, the heat returns to the atmosphere again.
20% of the world's population consume 80% of all resources.
In the past 15 years, average temperatures have broken all records.
At least 200 million people will become climate refugees by 2050.
Many states have already chosen the right path by investing in projects that are aimed at preserving the environment. Now do not worry about what is no longer necessary to think about what is. Let's write a sequel to the story all together.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-16 | Kate Ten | 11 | view |
| 2019-12-16 | shohruh.fayzulloyev | 55 | view |
- What are the issues of the world without borders? 84
- What are the issues of the world without borders 57
- There are a lot of environmental problems. Most of these problems arise due to people's lifestyles. Discuss. 61
- Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- In some countries it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age Is this a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to farm'.
Suggestion: to farm
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, at least, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 13.1623246493 342% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 140.0 41.998997996 333% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4821.0 1615.20841683 298% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 988.0 315.596192385 313% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87955465587 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.60646656023 4.20363070211 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47678393193 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 476.0 176.041082164 270% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481781376518 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1439.1 506.74238477 284% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 0.809619238477 1359% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 68.0 16.0721442886 423% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6564580222 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8970588235 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54411764706 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 8.67935871743 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 30.0 3.4128256513 879% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 224.0 78.4519038076 286% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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