Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
young people have been impetus of change in society since a long human history. Through their energy expense, they have potential to negate world unconventional practice and establishing a more prudent practice. But in today's world, youngster have been more indulge in their own matter and hardly give time to think about issue of the society.
Nowadays, younger people are more prone to sophisticated life style. Entertaining and living with pleasure is main norms of the young people. they spend their most of the time with doing party, going disco, for expedition, so on. Unlike our ancestor, they have not that kind of trouble to ruminate about it and have obligation to act. For instance, most of the my friends in high school had spent our leasure time with enjoying in a several game, sports and many more. We used to think all about a enjoyment at all the time. On the other hand, my father used to say me that in my age, he was more responsible person; hardship, rooted social problem and social work like constructing public place, participate in social event and zeal of changing wrong norms; were the part of his life. By relating that one can realize how young people, now, oblivion with a social issue.
Besides this, younger people now have to more focus in academic skills as the competition are growing day by day. In fact, they have to be serious in the study in order to get a good job and fantastic future ahead. only way to achieve is that by lingering in the school or academic activities all the time. On the other hand, an instituition also emphasize more on academic or make engage student with pedantic task. Contemplating issue of social welfare has been long gone with modernization; education institution including parents impose threat student's mind what flimsy condition will be if they do not hard enough to get a good grade. In this situation, only blame student for their distressing from the social role is unfair.
In conslusion, younger people are key for the social change however, in present time , their influence may be tepid in impact. since, they are the one who exercise positive change in the society, government as well as parents should make them aware about this issue as much possible.
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...bligation to act. For instance, most of the my friends in high school had spent our le...
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Suggestion: several games
...ent our leasure time with enjoying in a several game, sports and many more. We used to think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, in fact, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52639957993 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592207792208 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8665254465 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4210526316 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166417537015 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531345052696 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450001191629 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981734534751 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260596217318 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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