The graph below shows the number of male and female students studying IT at university from 1985-2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ng women are not studying. But amount of male students were 5000 in the 1985. Th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t studying. But amount of male students were 5000 in the 1985. Then after 5 year...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...amount of students of men only growing. In the end in 2015 male students were a mu...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arners and 29000 of female learners. In conclusion that male students was alway...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91911764706 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36219458032 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9676801409 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.625 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268606657383 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144640786683 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150840711228 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272679786761 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175068910233 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.