A planet is suffering from many problems, which is the biggest of these and what things are needed to be done to resolve it?
In recent years, our planet, the Earth has undergone a tremendous change not only in terms of a drastic rise in inhabitants but also climate change. This essay will discuss the reasons why climate change is the greatest problem affecting our contemporary world, which has endangered the existence of several species globally and provide some solutions to overcome it.
To begin with, there are several reasons in favour of climate change being the single largest challenge faced by our planet. The advent of industrialization and globalization has exerted an unprecedented strain on the earth's resources, which are being utilized at a pace far superior to what it takes to replenish them. This has resulted in catastrophic consequences. Global warming has caused the temperatures to soar worldwide and has caused glaciers to melt at an alarming rate, thereby increasing sea levels substantially. In addition, this increased temperature of the atmosphere has brought several species to the point of extinction. Consequently, the planet is experiencing severe droughts, floods and tornadoes.
However, there are favourable steps that are being undertaken by governments and authorities globally to resolve this concern. Firstly, the governments have realised that the dependence of non-renewable sources of energy is the primary reason for the release of gases in the atmosphere that has resulted in global climate change. Therefore, electric vehicles are being promoted. To reduce the presence of greenhouse gases, more trees are being planted along with the conservation of existing rain forests. For example, several trees capable of storing higher levels of CO2 have been planted to enhance its absorption.
To conclude, climate change is the biggest challenge faced by our planet and humankind. In my opinion, a combined sincere effort by all the governments and people is essential to protect our planet from its detrimental effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53177257525 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03519398817 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6212320148 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128241716642 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438027798323 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371497927235 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771941279 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268311756777 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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