Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning
In today's world everyone wants to be successful at each and every stage of life. Success is a main goal of human being.Success is not a single word which particularly attached with specific group of task.It can be related to any field either business,study or relationship everyone want to be successful.In my opinion success comes from hard work and planning with taking chance at right time.I discussed my view on this phenomenon here after.
There is not a specific steps to achieve success.Each and every fields have their own strategies or plan to achieve success.In some field like stock market a person must have to take risk at right time to be successful.In science research first a person have to take risk to choose one field to work on it. After some experiments he or she will get some result and then come to know that experiment is successful or not.If a person wish to start new business then he or she should take risk to start it with prior planning and carefulness.He or she have to works with some strategies.There are lots of business men who had taken risk to start new business with a new approach and they are successful today with hard work and their planning. World's richest man Bil Gets had taken risk to start Microsoft which is producing Windows based operating system.he started this production in the era of Linux based Operating system.So it was a risk to launch windows based Operating system that taken by Bil Gets at that time.
On the other side if one is wish to score highest in exam then one's should work with planning. They should make some strategies or plan and follow them carefully to achieve goals.Now if you think that he or she will start his or her preparation before one month of exam and one become ill before one month exam then this risk could be dangerous.one may not score good in exam or in worst case one should fail in examination.
So now to sum up my arguments in my point of view in some field risk is an important factor while in other filed proper planning with cautions is important on other hand some field need both risk and planning.Risk taken at right time with planning and caution can bring success in any realm of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, while, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64030612245 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62034254917 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 23.0359550562 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.272242496 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 227.375 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 49.0 23.4991977007 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20136975291 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086642764526 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592083046057 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124926258431 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584773659777 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 14.1392134831 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 12.1743820225 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.2143820225 193% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.