Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
Stress is the one of most common problem in the world. Many people in the world are suffering from different types of mental problems, depression and other mental disorders due to stress and it’s directly effect on people’s lives. This essay will describe what are the causes are related to stress and how to reduce our stress.
In our modern society, most of people are trying to compete each other in employments, education, religion and ethnically. How ever when people have competition each other it can be the one major cause to become stress. I believe this problem is starting from young age. Most of young crowd nowadays are trying to go to best university of college to do their higher education and they learning by hard to join to those colleges. Then they have a competition between with other student who are studying with them. Also, Their parents always forcing to study and pass the exams all the time instead of encourage them. When they are finally graduate from the college they have to find a suitable job for their qualifications. That’s the second step of how the stress going to be continue. As soon as they join to the employment people try become more competition than ever before. They will meet different type of people. At this point most of people think that happiness is always related to money, luxurious cars and houses and branded clothes. As a result, people are working day and night to fulfill those facilities. So, people will compete with other employees to become a outstanding person at the work place to get a promotions and high salary. All these causes will finally relate to our mental depression and stress.
However, there are some methods to reduce our stress. First of all People should try to change their life style. Some people will argue that changing human nature is pretty hard but at least they can spend some time with their family to go for a vacation or doing some leisure activities would be really helpful to reduce their stress and life style. Secondly, government can take some steps by introducing therapies and physical education classes at student’s colleges and universities. Moreover, eating healthy diet, exercising, swimming and having good sleep also help to reduce stress
Overall, I believe how much problems and competitions come to our life we have to do our limit and the best. otherwise it will effect to our mental life by stress and depression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...our stress. In our modern society, most of people are trying to compete each other in emp...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: HOW_EVER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'however'?
Suggestion: However
...ts, education, religion and ethnically. How ever when people have competition each other...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the young') or simply say ''Most young''.
Suggestion: Most of the young; Most young
...his problem is starting from young age. Most of young crowd nowadays are trying to go to best...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...hem. Also, Their parents always forcing to study and pass the exams all the time instead...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of how the stress going to be continue. As soon as they join to the employment peo...
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Line 5, column 939, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: otherwise,
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, at least, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93012048193 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54784383381 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510843373494 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6336886847 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9565217391 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253324065696 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818436900497 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931832881657 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179418259694 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850026639562 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.