Dear Mia,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this to apologize that I could not attend your party since I was out of my home. However, I am very disappointed with myself and promise it never happen again.
First of all, I am very sorry about last night. As you know my grandmother has not been on the good health conditions for a few months and she has been treated in the hospital. Actually, her family and doctor decided to move the hospital which is located abroad. Therefore, I needed to see her before she goes to the new treatment centre.
To avoid this happen again, I will ensure that I contact you either a phone call or text as soon as possible when I cannot make your promise.
Lastly, I apologize for my mistake and I am willing to make up for your party.
I look forward to receiving from you soon.
Best regards,
Kate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...ointed with myself and promise it never happen again. First of all, I am very sorry...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, lastly, look, so, therefore, well, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32109887769 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.048962211 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213298775103 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696310021196 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678735604591 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121054870704 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460872447752 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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