Dear Mr. Anand,
I am writing this letter to express my interest in the position of a full time software engineer which has been advertised by our company.
When I joined this company I was persuing my masters and therefore, I did not have time to work as a full time employee so I joined as a casual worker; However, last month I completed my degree and now I can work full-time.
In last one year, I have learned many new skills regarding the field of information technology and therefore I want to use my learning by working full-time in potential projects of our company.
It is not only beneficial for me to work as a permanent employee, company will also get a resource who has required knowledge about internal work of the organization.
Kindly let me know if you need any information or would you like to interview me.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest as per your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Sukhraj Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...xpress my interest in the position of a full time software engineer which has been advert...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...efore, I did not have time to work as a full time employee so I joined as a casual worker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69642857143 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79226311021 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.283369761 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25732930296 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101690680598 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266514325526 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107713749956 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028797362228 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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