Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them.
Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special
treatment. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them.
Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special
treatment. Discuss both views and give your opinion ?
Nowadays, there are many kids were born with special gifts that make them different from others. While some people harbor the view that those smart kids should be raise and taught separately with ordinary kids, some argue that they should be imparted together. In my opinion, special teaching should be applied for intelligent children but by the suitable methods.
On the one hand, children are born with innate talents such as high IQ, sophisticated art skill and so on, are different from normal kids in the way of thinking and expressing their thoughts and emotions. Talent kids also have some distinguish and unique behaviors, results in difficulties in harmony taking or playing with other kids. Thus, intelligent children should be taught and taken care differently compare to the typical child due to the differences in their mind. Besides, innate brightened children should be nurtured specially in order to enhancing those strengths and develop their marvelous skills.
On the other hand, as the majority of population are normal, the separation of education in intelligent and ordinary child can disable some basic living skills of those who are eminent. For example, it was a real case in China where high IQ kids were taught together in an isolated school in the purpose of stimulating their literacy and mind to the highest limitation. Government and Parents hoped their kids would grow up as scientists and supper professional persons, but turn out, when they mature, they cannot adapt with society due to lack of some basic social skills such as clearly expressing ideas, presenting or even making a right appointment with others. It clear that separating the talent child do not help to develop their talents but isolating them from society.
In conclusion, providing the special treatments and educations only beneficial to talent child only the methods were use precisely in the ways that enable them to harmony integrate into the community as well as develop their innate talents well.
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Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59566985849 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4883716387 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37697595702 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158903010329 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15415534215 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257342543876 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170076007834 0.056905535591 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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