Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice, the high level of disturbance caused by a newly opened restaurant, which operates until late night. this is a grave issue for us as we are unable to concentrate on our studies and sleep properly. could you please help us in resolving the problem.
Let me explain my situation, the brand new joint is a musical theme based outlet, so it has karaoke nights and jam sessions every night from 9 -12 pm in the night. Thus, it causes much noise and the volume is turned up during the live performances which is frustrating and annoying for me and I cannot concentrate on my assignments.
I would suggest the following: The owner changed its timings for the jam play and karaoke sessions from 9 -12 pm to 6 - 9 pm, so that we can doze off harmoniously and study in peace. Additionally, they can turn the volume down and do their activities indoors without creating much nuisance. could you please look into this matter with your urgent attention.
Thank you for your help.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67021276596 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63783014393 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686170212766 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8208296439 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19834630696 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776115320994 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691490088446 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121447158438 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594601681781 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.