Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my interest for the computer course in your college.
My name is smita. I am working as an accountant in xyz company. I came to know about this course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but there is one exception that I do not have elementary certificate of this.
Here, I would like to explain the reason firstly I am an accountant so I do not get time to do elementary course but I know the basics of computers properly even I do most of accounting on computer. Secondly, I feel my presentations are quite simple so to improve my productivity I am interesed in this course. Therefore,I will be able to use advance features of presentations and used it for other purposes.
I just want to request that please consider my application for this course under exception. If you want me to give test of elementary course, then I will be ready to give exam. I also have my presentations and projects to show. Please choose any way whichever is more convenient to you.
Looking for a positive reply.
Yours faithfully
Smita
- Your friend had made a plan for you two to see a movie together but you cannot join him You have found another friend who can go instead of you Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Sa 73
- Nowadays many young people are drawn towards dangerous sports What makes them so attractive What measures should be taken to regulate such sports and minimize the risks 56
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods 73
- Nowadays there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- People are wearing western style clothes rather than the traditional type of clothes Is it a positive or a negative development 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s course While surfing on the internet. I am keenly interested in doing this but ...
^
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...I am interesed in this course. Therefore,I will be able to use advance features of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90528300161 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0337054865 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1428571429 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1428571429 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196382250185 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600271981215 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457931853611 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107637064548 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060114990843 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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