Planet earth is in danger and decaying with unimaginable speed. Major threat to our planet is of global warming and resultant higher that leads to melting glaciers and burning forests. It has already been very late and damage is visible in almost all countries. In my opinion, international community should do more to tackle this threat and make a sustainable model of development.
Who is responsible for this biggest threat on mother earth?. World community. Global warming is a man-made disaster in progress despite known consequences.International community need to take action on ground to prevent it from extending to irreversible state. This is a global issue and one person/country can not alone achieve the target. International community as a whole need to follow required measues such as ban use of plastic, recycle products, plant trees, do not waste any kind of energy etc.to make a sustainable model for mother earth.
Everyone need to contribute and accountability with proper laws need to be created worldwide so that people become aware and work towards damage control.
Some people argue that developed countries need to do more as they have better resources and finances whereas poorer countries need to allocate their resources to well being of their populations. In my opinion, any country which can contribute should definitely do more efforrts, but poorer countries too should not add burden on mother earth and focus on sustaible resources for future development.
To conclude, Yes It is quite necessary for whole world to come together to fight menace of global warming. This is not about want, this is about survival, there are no exceptions by nature when it comes to natual calamity. Only way to move forward is if international community comes to gether, governement, organizations and people do their part to save mother earth and control global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: International
... in progress despite known consequences.International community need to take action on ground...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hat developed countries need to do more as they have better resources and finances...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther earth and control global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, whereas, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25657894737 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06558475711 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1102637205 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258492010046 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783576656566 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905494247517 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129239354833 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725805134851 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.