Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Many people think that due to the differences in physical and mental between males and females, there are certain jobs will be more suitable for a specific gender than the rest. In my opinion, I partly disagree with this statement.
There are some reasons why I do not support this view. Our perception of career goals and choosing jobs are effected significantly by traditional education and lifestyle from our own family. We take granted the picture of fathers working outside to earn money, guarantee the life quality of the whole family. Those for mothers are persons who spend most of the time taking care of children, house cleaning and cooking. As a result, the perception of responsibility and future jobs of men and women of many people is quite restricted and limited. They propose that men tend to do manual work and women only should focus on family or do some paperwork.
The second reason is both genders are educated equally from nursery schools to higher-level education. Even in training course when they already get a job, males and females are fairly treated and trained. Everyone has the same career opportunities in which the sector they pursue. However, in order to get a significant position or a lower one, it definitely depends on the individual’s ability and other things. For example, in the office environment, not only women work as an accountant but also many men do. Likewise, the security position is undertaken by anyone as long as they meet the requirements of employers.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that there are no certain jobs which is totally suitable for a specific gender</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16363636364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15787563283 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3096158512 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307830156446 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080857027802 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803832104187 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166887782334 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541888144522 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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