You have recently attended a professional course. Write a letter to your manager to thank him/her for the opportunity. In your letter, you should tell:
– What it was about?
– Explain why it was helpful to you.
– Suggest other co-workers who should attend the course.
Dear Cameroon,
I am writing this to thank you for nominating me to the Artificial Intelligence course. The module turned out to be an immense bundle of knowledge keeping us abreast with Robotics technology.
I was under the impression that the lectures would be largely focused on basics and fundamentals of AI but they actually contained deeper insights of machine Learning. The content was well-structured and the instructors were qualified, well-informed and knowledgeable. The sessions rendered a comprehensive and thorough information on coding, Especially the 6-hour session by Anthony Hopkins on integrating Python with machines.
I definitely recommend this course to every member in our team but since we have a constraint on seat-limit, I would propose Steve and Lauren for the up-coming schedule. The course will surely boost their skill and we could leverage their expertise efficiently for the Larson and Turbo project. If you could manage to obtain a higher seat count, please nominate yourself too.
Yours Sincerely,
John Gresham
- As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs.What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from the situation? 73
- Some section of the society feels that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that older people should be encouraged to live independently.Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate and 78
- Some people use technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing to doctor. Why this is so. It is positive or negative development according to you. 84
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? 78
- There are more cars on the roads these days and more accidents. As a result, some politicians have suggested that people should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single test. What do you think are the advantages of repeat 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Sincerely, John Gresham
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67283950617 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11483218582 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.734567901235 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.964123419 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135811607317 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522963558864 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509460974304 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759201486937 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296793831655 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 7.59969072165 139% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.