You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country.You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to the landlord.In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
I am writing a letter of request to you about some of our home furniture.
I am David living with my family as a tenant in one of your homes in the Chelsea area of Noffel Lushato Street.My flat number is 457.
I tell you that some furniture in the house is worn out and cannot be used.The freezer refrigerator we have in the kitchen is not working properly and the food in it is deteriorating quickly and we cannot store food for long.And another tool that can no longer be used is the hot water radiator. As the radiator is pierced and the water is leaking it and most of the time we have to turn it off so we can't use hot water.
I have contacted you several times before but failed to talk to you.I urge you to send in a repair as soon as possible to repair the fridge freezer. But I have to say about the hot water radiator, it has to be replaced.Because I brought a repairman myself, he said that the radiator could not be repaired.
I look forward to hearing for you as soon as possible
Yours sinerely,
Daniali
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- Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.Write a letter to the newspaper.In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward.mention what they have done to help the community.say what reward you would lik 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith my family as a tenant in one of your homes in the Chelsea area of Noffel Lu...
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Suggestion:
...ne of your homes in the Chelsea area of Noffel Lushato Street.My flat number is ...
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Suggestion: My
...Chelsea area of Noffel Lushato Street.My flat number is 457. I tell you tha...
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Suggestion: The
...he house is worn out and cannot be used.The freezer refrigerator we have in the kit...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ickly and we cannot store food for long.And another tool that can no longer be used...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...f the time we have to turn it off so we cant use hot water. I have contacted yo...
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Suggestion: I
... times before but failed to talk to you.I urge you to send in a repair as soon as...
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Suggestion: Because
...t water radiator, it has to be replaced.Because I brought a repairman myself, he said t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35532994924 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54316240611 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2254810777 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163534946624 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836808685048 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667755075065 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985147744718 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558298188773 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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