The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts detail information about the proportion of three different sources of electricity in
four countries (India, Sweden, Morocco, and Vietnam) from 2003 to 2008.
Overall, Vietnam and Morocco did not use any nuclear power for electricity production. It can also be
seen that while fossil fuels were the largest source of electricity supply in Vietnam and India, they only
occupied a relatively marginal proportion in Morocco and Sweden during the examined years.
In Vietnam, 56% of the total amount of electricity was produced from fossil fuels, while the figure for
Morocco was only 5%. The rest of the electricity, in both nations, was generated solely from hydropower.
In India however, electricity from fossil fuels contributed to 82% of the entire quantity of
electricity produced, which was also the highest figure for fossil fuel use among the four countries.
Meanwhile, fossil fuels were only responsible for 4% of the total generated electricity in Sweden, with
hydropower and nuclear power contributing 52% and 44% respectively.
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- The chart shows information about the actual and expected figures of population in three cities Jakarta Sao Paulo and Shanghai Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
- The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The chart below shows the proportion of renewable energy in total enrgy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of government spending on roads and transport in 4 countries in the years 1990 1995 2000 2005 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53614457831 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84658793186 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1121166312 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.285714286 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118496889614 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622326132027 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670637706154 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518415772952 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511878062114 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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