Today, tourism becomes a very big industry worldwide. Some countries' economy depends heavily on tourism like Singapore 60 per cent GDP income generated through tourism only. But underdeveloped countries are not much tourist-friendly and tourism over there has many disadvantages as well as some advantages. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss in detail.
First of all, let's discuss why underdeveloped countries have disadvantages in tourism. First thing in these countries tourists face is related to their safety as the crime rate in these countries are very high especially against tourist. Next, no proper public facilities are available for tourists in these countries. As these countries do not have resources to conserve their tourist spots properly. For example, some African countries have some tourist spots recognised by world heritage society but due to lack of support by the government, these are not attracting so many tourists.
On the other hand, tourist also gets some advantages in underdeveloped countries like tourist spots are cheaper than in developed countries. In these countries, tourist spots are not much crowded and tourist can enjoy the tourist spot fully. These spots are easily accessible and affordable.
To conclude, in underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages as well as advantages as discussed in the above essay in detail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, well, for example, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57345971564 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07927789215 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.463000851 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4615384615 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16717830212 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827555710927 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935757053738 0.071462118173 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1572179305 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105053867832 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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