Some people have great ambitions in life, others don’t. Do you think ambition is important to succeed in life? Is it a positive or a negative quality to have?
Being successful itself is a great pride for everyone in this competitive world. Presently, being ambitious is supposed to be necessary in order to accomplish success by some proportion of people. Here, I would like to establish ambition is significant along with its positive and negative effects.
There are manifold points to define importance of ambition in life. First and foremost, Without ambition, life is like 'a ship without sailor'. Thus, ambition is pivotal to get clear prospective of life so that one can focus on his target with strong commitment. Apart from it, ambition contibutes remarkably to evolve determination to be successful. Therefore, ambitious person tries his level best to excel in his life.
Numerous points can be put down to support its positive side. Initially, ambition plays a magnificent role to make a person goal-oriented. To illustrate this, it not only reminds aim in every walk of life but also stimulates to pave the road to destiny. Hence, ambition is a spirit boosting tonic to attain milestones of life. By contrast, it has darker side too.
To begin with, some people have biggest ambitions but less talent, ability and willing to toil hard. Consequently, they, sometime, may join wrong ways to achieve breakthrough which can deface their whole lives. Besides this, sometime, being over ambitious is responsible to cause some disasterous mishappenings. For instance, some people get failed to fulfill their aims, unfortunately, due to social, personal or economic reasons. Thence, they are more likely to commit suicide or murder that can destroy their everything.
To recapitulate, getting success is not 'a piece of cake' for everyone. So, ambition should be determined according to inner caliber, interst, commitment and circumstances to get the best out of it.
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I would like to establish ambition is significant along with its positive and negative effects.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: Apart from it, ambition contibutes remarkably to evolve determination to be successful.
Error: contibutes Suggestion: contributes
Sentence: Besides this, sometime, being over ambitious is responsible to cause some disasterous mishappenings.
Error: mishappenings Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: disasterous Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: So, ambition should be determined according to inner caliber, interst, commitment and circumstances to get the best out of it.
Error: interst Suggestion: interest
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 289 350
No. of Characters: 1468 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.123 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.08 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.85 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.45 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.827 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
apart from spellings , where
apart from spellings , where is the problem to reach 8.0 ????
and how r ideas ??? n is the use of clear prospective good in above essay ???
Ideas are great. But it is
Ideas are great.
But it is not developed smoothly for the second and third paragraph. the Sentence-Sentence Coherence is low.
Read this essay and you will understand what we mean 'smoothly':
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Look at the Sentence-Sentence Coherence:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
this writing style actually is in the favor of essay E-rater even though there are some issues too.
plz check.my essay sir