Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Many schools have adopted uniform policy for their students, making it mandatory to follow; however, few schools still believe in allowing the students in any dress they wear. In my opinion, the benefits of having school uniform far-weigh its disadvantages.
To begin with, the foremost reason I believe for having uniform is it indicates unity and uniformity among the students. The children from all background can be seen in same type of dress, which does not lead to any problem of separation based on financial status or caste and creed. For instance, the wealthy society can send their children in designer garments but the destitute cannot; this may create the feeling of inferiority in poor students, which is not good for their overall development. Secondly, it saves time and money for choosing and getting ready on daily basis. Undoubtedly, in case of uniform, the student has to just select the same pair and get ready without bothering about the style, color, pattern or matching accessories, giving silent message that academics is students' first priority. When students are given chance to dress as per their choice then most of them would be interested in fashion and appearance rather than paying attention on education, which is the essential element for building their career and the prime reason for going school. Apart from this, the other reason that supports uniform culture is that if the child is lost then uniform stands as an identity, keeping the child safe to reach the school. Therefore, in every case school uniform is good for school-going children.
Despite the above pros, the critics argue that school uniform has adverse effect on creativity of child. Knowing the dress code would limit the student's imagination; if no uniform then only he would think of different shades and combination that makes him look trendy. Moreover, they believe that such imaginative thinking is required for student's making career in fashion and design industry. Thus, it is great loss for such people.
To sum up, I pen down saying, there are more merits of having school has uniform. The children learn uniformity and saves time in dressing, paying more attention to the curriculum. In addition, uniform helps in security of child, thereby making uniform as mandatory option for school students. Although some opponents argue that it hampers the creativity, but the child has to wear uniform only during school hours; they can show their creativity in remaining time. Thus, in all cases, the uniform should exists for students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... Knowing the dress code would limit the students imagination; if no uniform then only h...
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Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...students imagination; if no uniform then only he would think of different shades ...
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Line 13, column 506, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'exist'
Suggestion: exist
... Thus, in all cases, the uniform should exists for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, in all cases, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15144230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50966028364 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8696645331 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.789473684 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3684210526 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363389053575 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126988035735 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957450124565 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256767360973 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921314288941 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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