Some people say that competitive sports have advantages for people from different groups and countries, while others believe that competitive sports only create problems between people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While, nowadays, sports competitions attract a lot of attention worldwide for entertainment, there is a controversial debate regarding whether competitiveness raises more problems than its benefits. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay, and I will state my perspective in the conclusion.
There are, indeed, several positive benefits for competition in sports. Firstly, not only it attracts more audience, which means more investments in games by industries and governments, but also do more talented people pursuit sports. Soccer, for example, is a worldwide interest these days, leading to attracting both funding and human capital into playing football. Secondly, competition makes local or national people closer. Despite all political or religious agendas, if individuals follow a team that represents a local place or a country, they would feel connected by having the same interest.
However, there are drawbacks to ever-rising competitiveness in sports, which makes several social issues. Competition might lead to misbehaviors among followers to undermine the opponent's players. Anti-black chanting in European soccer leagues is one of the adverse consequences of rivalry in sport, raised alarming concerns among critics. Furthermore, countries might use competition for their agendas to demonstrate their superiority. For example, in Russia, which is in the middle of the political confliction with western countries, national players, who are persuaded by the government, use drugs and doping to obtain top-level in their fields.
In conclusion, while I understand that there are few adverse effects due to raising in the competition in sports, it seems that its benefits outweigh its disadvantages, by helping to have a closer nation with a higher quality of plays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71111111111 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17569862052 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0048211742 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217420006672 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731111578882 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462820793416 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124058957998 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401210564689 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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