. You are going to take a vacation soon and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:
– Tell him/her why you want the holiday/vacation
– Describe your plan
– Invite him/her to go with you.
Dear Joseph,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I'm writing to ask you to accompany me on my trip to Thailand next month.
As you know, how hectic my job is and sometimes I've to work overtime too. That is why I feel so low nowadays and I'm planning to take a week break from this monotonous work routine to spend some time relaxing and rejuvenating myself in tranquil countryside.
With regard to the plan, I remember last time you mentioned your cousin Maria's trip to Thailand and how wonderful it was. So, I've also decided to visit the same country once and explore popular tourist destinations such as Phuket, Karabi and Pattaya. A week can be perfectly spent there visiting spectacular beaches, Buddhist temples, enjoying delicious Thai cuisine and picturesque sights of Phi-Phi islands. As you are master in organizing trips, I would love to have your recommendations as well.
As for the company, I was wondering if you could join me during my excursion. I know you are a fan of seafood and couldn't say no to this. I'm pretty sure that we would enjoy to the fullest and come back with recharged batteries and lots of unforgettable memories.
Please confirm soon so that we can book our tickets.
Best wishes,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... in radiant health and best of spirits. Im writing to ask you to accompany me on m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...now, how hectic my job is and sometimes Ive to work overtime too. That is why I fee...
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Suggestion: I'm
... That is why I feel so low nowadays and Im planning to take a week break from this...
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Suggestion: I've
... Thailand and how wonderful it was. So, Ive also decided to visit the same country ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...on. I know you are a fan of seafood and couldnt say no to this. Im pretty sure that we ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... of seafood and couldnt say no to this. Im pretty sure that we would enjoy to the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies and lots of unforgettable memories. Please confirm soon so that we can book ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as for, i feel, such as, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80542986425 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66668287568 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683257918552 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5804364121 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6923076923 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230248347353 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765018221765 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663941312134 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112417521633 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577937478368 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.