It is argued that many people tend to travel abroad over the sea is immensely increasing in recent years. The main factor is some airlines making price drop to make even moderate people also could use flights to travel. As a result, tourism is producing 60% of revenue to the government as diverse people are invading other countries. This essay describes the benefits and drawbacks of proliferating tourism in other countries and also I believe that increasing tourism in different countries constructs the good facilities and infrastructure well whilst it would devote some negative impacts as well.
On the one hand, travel abroad is a good leisure activity scientifically. Moreover, travelers can meet the different cultures of people and tend to speak other languages. Furthermore, it creates employment for the local people and services which includes accommodation, entertainment, and transportation. To exemplify, according to the survey and statistics, 10 million people have visited the USA in 2005 - 2009. Especially, Miami, Florida made a record of the highest tourist visited the city of America to explore the culture and try diverse activities for their leisure time.
On the flip side, most predominantly tourism impacts the natural environment which leads to pollution in the area. As a consequence, it affects the local habitat of wild animals and decaying them. However, the government has made good infrastructure and star hotels to facilitate the tourists, some people incautious about the tradition and culture of the destination country. For instance, throwing plastic bags, breaking glasses, campfire, and attire.
To conclude the growing international travel's benefits and drawbacks in diverse countries, despite tourism devoting abundant good things which would make people feel relax and fun, some repercussions make the environment and habitats suffer. Henceforward, the government should impose a law to facilitate the travelers as well as contain the environmental impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59672131148 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08275268076 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4145588572 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.8 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190380766952 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564107901319 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057602609789 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109157380476 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062466595128 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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