Would you like to live a long, calm life until 100 years old or would you prefer a shorter life but much more intense. Decide and explain your reasons.
Lifestyle has always been a debatable issue due to its significant impacts on many other aspects of life. Many believe that a peaceful life is a way to enjoy life, while the other regards a life with more intensity is a better life even when they have to spend a shorter time living. From my perspective, I believe that being able to live for a century with calmness and being relaxed is the greatest way to live.
On the one hand, living an intensive life will disable one from knowing the greatest meanings of life. However, a life full of intensity includes many dangerous or even illegal activities such as participating in racing events, doing drugs and living an unhealthy life. A report from the University of Michigan demonstrates that those who enjoy racing, drugs share a similarity of living shorter than those who do not.
On the other hand, a calm life creates individuals numerous opportunities in their life. People are unable to avoid mistakes in their life. For some people, they always find themselves in trouble almost every day. Some mistakes will lead to no consequences while some will have a significant impact on an individual's life such as their family, career, and happiness. Therefore, if one chooses a calm life, he will create the ability to redeem his mistakes. A psychology laboratory in Netherland shows that most successful people live a longer life because they put effort into trying a better solution to the problem but not becoming pessimistic and feeling regretful about what they did.
In conclusion, a long life does not only provide us chances to witness the greatest parts in life but also let one fixes what he has done wrong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...me will have a significant impact on an individuals life such as their family, career, and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83972125436 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64144133017 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3240121944 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217326439287 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868391142887 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502134461502 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139972949736 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250248881436 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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