Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">With the development and achievement of the
large amounts of methods to produce energy, many people begin to doubt whether
it is correct to produce energy at the cost of sacrificing the environment.
There are many aspects to dwell on when it comes to the issue stated in our
prompt, which one is the better choice for governments to take for the
protection of natural environment? Faced with the tough choice, I personally
think it is better to pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution produced by
companies and industries.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">In the first place, all companies are eager
to augment the amount of profits under the lowest cost. In contemporary
society, companies and industries are under more and more difficulties to make
profits, that is, in order to maintain their business, some industrial
companies, for example, will definitely choose the cheapest way to generate
energy and exhauste gases which are poisonous to the whole environment. By
legislating, companies and industries are forced to exhaust limited gases,
which can not only decline the pollutants, but also prevent the negative
competition between companies.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">In the second place, people and animals
living in the area where power plants and industries located need to be protected
instead of just moving away. As the development of technology, more and more
electrical devices were produced. In order to support cities with a steady,
sufficient electricity, government inevitably need to construct new companies
to generate energy, thus more and more pollutants will be produced. By pass or
create a new law, companies and industries are forced to exhaust limited gases,
which can not only decline the pollutants, but also prevent the negative
competition between companies.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US">Irrefutably, some people might argue that
it is not sagacious to use the method which cannot truly solve the question of
our environment. However, the damage to the environment has formed, all we can
do is to prevent the situation from getting worse and worse. Thus, as far as I
am concerned, I still insist the choice I made—to pass and enforce laws to
reduce the pollution produced by companies and industries.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US"> </span></p>
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- Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals. Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harmful chemicals may be doing to th 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, thus, well, as for, for example, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.90835579515 4.8611393121 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.02100405965 2.67179642975 263% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501347708895 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.89806762 48.9658058833 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.3 100.406767564 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.1 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 5.45110844103 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.53405017921 794% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0486633732872 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383415965948 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346622558124 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0164175758031 0.150856017488 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272274780148 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 11.7677419355 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.54 58.1214874552 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 10.1575268817 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 23.39 10.9000537634 215% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 10.002688172 210% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.