When doing this option, there must bu myraids of concerns.However, there is no doubt that I wil choose to interrupt and correct the mistakes right away.
The second and thrid options have plenty of drawbacks and terrible consequences.If you choose to point out the miatake after the meeting or say nothing, the other audiences have no chance to know the correct information and this mistake will mislead them. For instance, when I was in high school, the ordinator held a class meeting on inreoducing the schedele of visiting the new Nature Museum. She told us the incorrect gathering time before the school gate ,where we should take the school bus to the museum.However, none of us pointed out this mistake directly, even there were some classmates in the students union who knowing the accurate arrangements of this trip.Some of them told the teacher the exact time after this meeting and the teacher corrected this information.However,It was too late since some students have left the room without knowing the correction. As a result ,on the day to the visit, some students missed the school bus heading to the museum and then they had to spend lots of money to take a taxi.
By pointing out the mistake in the meeting, it not only benefits the audiences who can get access to the correct information but also offer an exceptional opportunity to the presenter to communicate with the audience. When the presenter is on the stage to make a public talk, they are all willing and open to hear the feedbacks from the audiences, including discussing the mistake. The China Education Associate (CEA) has done a suvey about whether the people want to get feedbacks from the audiences.Nearly ninety percent of the audiences says that they want to communicate with the listeners.A respondent stated that even the audiecne pointing out the mistake , it is also a chance to correct and do better in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, then, as to, for instance, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91021671827 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9133709906 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.664752744 48.9658058833 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.25 100.406767564 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.375 20.6045352989 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162021160727 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691407264368 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489931279865 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114283116908 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353879756544 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 11.7677419355 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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