Although traditional ideas become to disappear nowadays, some thoughts are still alive in the mind of an older generation. However, old people try to manage younger generations’ behavior and it is not accepted by modern society. In my view, staying in an old fashion is not useful and must be overcome.
First of all, general opinions are changing day by day and individuals have to keep up with trends. What I mean by this, customary views have lost their actuality and are not used by society anymore. For example, in some Islamic countries, girls are obliged to wear a scarf because of religious reasons. As a result, most of the teens have conflicts with their parents due to divergence.
Secondly, there is no doubt that individuals must expand their outlook and must be open-minded. They need original ideas which are products of their brains. Only in this case, they can aim to sell on their thoughts to others.
On the other hand, the custom is an important factor for society members and must be maintained. There are some traditions that display the origin and lifestyle of the country. For example, in Azerbaijan, there are many wedding cliches that are enjoyable and came from past times. For this reason, the local population, especially older ones tends to carry on them.
All things considered, a doubtless fact is that everyone should respect each other’s points and try to avoid being inflexible. Personally, I believe that views must be developed and changed to understand young generations easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an old fashion" with adverb for "old"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... by modern society. In my view, staying in an old fashion is not useful and must be overcome. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i mean, no doubt, as a result, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03543307087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76863483159 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3855199478 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.9375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173287368678 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512489513911 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496457007624 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863512592816 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525518494465 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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