In the contemporary era, youngsters migrate from villages to the urban areas for the purpose of getting education or finding job. The reasons behind this trend are that cities offer better education system and employment opportunities. From my perspective, drawbacks of this trend are eclipsed by its advantages in the sense that acquisition of quality education will be helpful in brightening up the future and getting the desired job.
The first and foremost reason for the movement of youth from rural to urban area is availability of educational institutions in which staff is highly qualified and trained. In these institutions, there is provision of wide range of streams like medical, non-medical, commerce, arts etc. Thus, students have copious options and it becomes convenient for them to go in the field of their interest. Furthermore, sources of income in the cities are always greater than villages as people can earn money by doing a job in a company or they can start their own business.In a recent survey it is found that 80 percent of job seekers have succeeded in finding work and earning a handsome salary.
The advantage of living in the city that every type facility is avalaible there. like hospitals, schools, banks, shopping malls, theater, sources of transportation etc. Because of all these life of masses becomes convenient comfortable. Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages of living in the cities. One of these is that environment of these places is polluted due to chemicals released by industries and vehicles. Therefore, the air which is inhaled is contaminated which leads to various health problems.
To illustrate, weighing up pros and cons, it is evident that disadvantages are overshadowed by the advantages of phenomenon of people move from rural to urban areas.
- The state of the enviroment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world Apart from government measures ad policies what can individuals do on a personal level to combat the negative effects that our lifestyles have on the enviroment 68
- Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Is it a positive or negative development? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- In many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities What do you think are reasons of these Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this? 84
- Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2439862543 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0187472946 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2132517573 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114702326111 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357799861231 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399610575435 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721924324416 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306187307783 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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