You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring to your attention on an infamous restaurant in Karachi, Nola Street, Near HSDF Bank and would be grateful if you could publish about this in your newspaper so that more people would come and visit the hotel.
Karachi is the biggest hub of food streets and variety of foods with different tastes can be found here but very few restaurants are able to draw people’s attention and convince them to visit again. CHICKEN COLLAGE is one of them. Indian, continental, Turkish, Japanese, Irish, Chinese, Austrian foods are served here. I preferred having Japanese Sushi and I bet no where else I ever have had this tasty dish, especially, the sauce provided along with it is of perfect taste. I am inspired by a great ambience with live music played on a small stage enriched my mind with pleasant feelings. Most importantly, the staff co-ordination was excellent and made sure we all had the best serving.
I am grateful for taking time reading this letter. Waiting for a positive response from you.
Warm regards,
Tonny
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...eferred having Japanese Sushi and I bet no where else I ever have had this tasty d...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88950276243 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58343864753 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.762430939227 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2752411431 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207851872853 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594242381215 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520970262083 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130706527438 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416676321328 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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