Studying abroad can be highly motivational for students and also inspire their dreams. Howewer, whilst studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on students, there are also many difficulties that they may meet a long the way. With this in mind, it is more advantageous to study at home.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Whether or not it is essential for students to study in foreign countries to be a hotly debated issue. There are those who argue that there will be varieties of beneficial things if students decide to study abroad. To my mind, there are both advantages and disadvantages for studying in foreign countries.
Living far away from home, young adults may be more mature than those who approach domestic educational system because they have to cook, look after themselves as well as daily timetable. Particularly, learners have a golden opportunity to understand better a wide range of culture thanks to foreign students.Moreover, with the developed educational systems in foreign countries, students would have many benefits to equip with their professional skills later. It is clear that a large number amount of valuable knowledge is absorbed by students in the fields of chemistry, physics or astronomy. In these fields, students have adequate labs and advanced technologies to meet requirements of doing further researches or doing experiment. As a result, they will gain and improve much more academic knowledge.
In my opinion, it is necessary for parents who have high income to allow and encourage their children to study abroad. This is the best way to equip their professional skills with valuable knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not it is essential for students to study i...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...e of culture thanks to foreign students.Moreover, with the developed educational systems...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32380952381 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98059103241 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1297645715 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286273565696 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104670018418 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508878788689 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197896966951 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035865669437 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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