The difference between culture can be felt through perceiving what the culture emphasis on. In some region, senior citizens are linked with great honour and prestige, in other places, however, young and energetic are cherished.
Being old is a natural process, while variable meaning may be attached to it. On the one hand, gaining more wisdom and becoming insightful are the undeniable merits of this transformation, with a broader vision and accurate judgement ability that honed through years of hard -working, the inexperienced youngster may constantly seek advice from the elderly. On the other hand, innovation and vitality, which are the attributes that could hardly be found on the old people, may easily be spotted among young adults. The most dominant traits that generalized from these two group, full of experience versus creativity, are actually mutually complementary. While based on the historical reason or traditional stereotype, some culture may overly emphasis on one of the features over the other.
In modern world, in an attempt to survive and prosper in a long run, a civilization needs to promote the importance of what been characterized in both age groups. Even though the advice from the elderly or the guidance from the time-honoured traditional idea, have previously brought success and accomplishments, yet should combine with the intuition of innovation and adjustment for better adaptation in the current world.
In conclusion, stressing the significance of the old’s wisdom as well as the youth’s flexibility, are beneficial to the individual’s aspiration and the culture’s longevity.
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.Discuss both these views a 89
- Many museum charge for admission fee, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- A family has a great influence on children s development but the outside of home play a bigger part in children s life Do you agree or disagree 96
- In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- With growing population in cities more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas Is it a positive or negative development 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5969581749 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17170108727 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8400830128 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149616880984 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508952002465 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447411041058 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815744005521 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367056375262 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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