Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the delivery services of your company. The reason of this belief is the issues faced by me with the last order that i made.
20 days back, i ordered a phone on your online site, during the mega sale of electronics. It was an Iphone 7 and the transaction was was completed successfully using debit card. Three days ago, the order arrived, and when i opened it, there was no iphone in it. It had a box with charger, head phone and other documents.
After 10 days i would need to go to Australia for an assignment and require the phone immediately. The ideal solution would be that you replace the order and send me the same phone as soon as possible. If that is not possible, inform me of your inability to deliver the phone before 10 days.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ben Askren
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...es faced by me with the last order that i made. 20 days back, i ordered a phon...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ast order that i made. 20 days back, i ordered a phone on your online site, du...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: was
... It was an Iphone 7 and the transaction was was completed successfully using debit card...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...was an Iphone 7 and the transaction was was completed successfully using debit card...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e days ago, the order arrived, and when i opened it, there was no iphone in it. I...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e and other documents. After 10 days i would need to go to Australia for an as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6397515528 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57165360434 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9047773306 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.9090909091 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200315620369 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694052768538 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452528393167 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106029074996 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410495723127 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.