You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Jhon,
i recently received your letter in which you ask about my advice for "continuing college" or go the "job".Well i know you personally and in my opinion you should go for the job and try to work hard in the Dream field of yours.
No doubt, College life is full of fun but believe me you didn't get any real skill for practical work .if you follow my advice you will be able to earn more then 6000$ per Month in the end of your one year field experience.
I know you want to join film industry as Director. i advice you to join some director as assistant and try to get some solid skills on Film editing, i know you are good in it, i think after spending two or three year with some good Director you will be able to work as independent film maker.
wish you best of luck and waiting for your sound decision in your next letter.
your Friend
Umer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Well
...college' or go the 'job'.Well i know you personally and in my opinion...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ge' or go the 'job'.Well i know you personally and in my opinion y...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... life is full of fun but believe me you didnt get any real skill for practical work ....
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nt get any real skill for practical work .if you follow my advice you will be able...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...my advice you will be able to earn more then 6000$ per Month in the end of your one ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$6000'.
Suggestion: $6000
...vice you will be able to earn more then 6000$ per Month in the end of your one year ...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 6000$ per Month in the end of your one year field experience. I know you want...
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Line 7, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...want to join film industry as Director. i advice you to join some director as ass...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...nt to join film industry as Director. i advice you to join some director as assistant ...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... get some solid skills on Film editing, i know you are good in it, i think after ...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ilm editing, i know you are good in it, i think after spending two or three year ...
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Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you will be able to work as independent film maker. wish you best of luck and ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wish
...e to work as independent film maker. wish you best of luck and waiting for your s...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...r sound decision in your next letter. your Friend Umer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, i think, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31736526946 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60775521272 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4310249193 44.8134815571 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 16.8248392259 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326616613945 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155616321761 0.0766984524023 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078869928115 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185257623754 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797783658635 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.