Some people think its better to choose friends who always have to same opinions as them.Other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this modern time, the issue of choosing friend bas become highly controversial. The people in the society supporting different idea relevant this issue. In this essay I will examine both sides of the argument.
Generally speaking there are a wide range of different reasons for a having friend why is suppose to be dissimilar from us. I partially agree with this argument because according to me friendship is vital part of healthy society.When sone people choosing their friends they want to be find some who understand with each other.However, for this people is not meaning the find someone exactly has same hobby or ideas.Because different people or groups might be strong friendships as a rock music groups or professional players. The illustrate, if one side know a lot of things about arts the other one could be learn within this communication.Furthermore, this friendship provide developing to theirselves. Such as finding different music groups or learning one langue.
Despite of this arguments, the rest of the people believing for well-being friendship everybody must find common partner. In addition, the balance of friendship comes from having same vision,Thus if they want to be find happiness in the life should be find someone with sharing same affairs.For example, they supports, the different persons always keep discussing with each other or they can’t be deal with what they gonna be doing in their leisure time. And this bad things impact on their life therefore it significant to find true match for friends.
In conclusion, for an individual development I support the dissimilar friendship. In my view of opinion, the amusement is coming from different part of ideas. Moreover, lack of the different culture or believes how we could be community?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to friend'
Suggestion: to friend
...this modern time, the issue of choosing friend bas become highly controversial. The pe...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...rent reasons for a having friend why is suppose to be dissimilar from us. I partially a...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...rent reasons for a having friend why is suppose to be dissimilar from us. I partially a...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...ndship is vital part of healthy society.When sone people choosing their friends they...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ndship is vital part of healthy society.When sone people choosing their friends they...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ind some who understand with each other.However, for this people is not meaning the fin...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...understand with each other.However, for this people is not meaning the find someone ...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ith each other.However, for this people is not meaning the find someone exactly has same hobby...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...someone exactly has same hobby or ideas.Because different people or groups might be str...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...k music groups or professional players. The illustrate, if one side know a lot of things about...
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Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ould be learn within this communication.Furthermore, this friendship provide developing to ...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or learning one langue. Despite of this arguments, the rest of the people belie...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Thus
...friendship comes from having same vision,Thus if they want to be find happiness in th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... find someone with sharing same affairs.For example, they supports, the different p...
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Line 9, column 310, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
... sharing same affairs.For example, they supports, the different persons always keep disc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26480836237 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11255742027 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.947154918 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144190324451 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491930288744 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439666938315 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879519988308 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236910028481 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.