Some people think that old people need to live in special communities, but others believe they should live with their family and adult children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial debate regarding where elderly people should live: in special community places or in a home with their family. This essay believes that it is in the best of interest of a family if old people live with their children and the reasons behind both perspectives will be discussed in this essay.
There is a substantial upside if elderly people live in special places, where elaborately designed to fulfill their needs. As people get older, they will encounter different illnesses, such as cancer, or heart conditions, which are needed special attention on a daily basis or in the case of emergency. In most community places these days, experienced nurses and advanced medical facilities are available to service residents, which make living there more convenient than a residential apartment. Furthermore, with rising expenses of living in cities and increasing rents, families are forced to live in small apartments, leaving less space for grandparents to live with their adult children.
However, we could not deny the benefit of living with family for old people. With dual-income families become more common in modern society, grandparents would become handy by being at home during the day, taking care of children, and helping in house chores. In this case, parents do not force to hire a nanny for their long working hours or register their children for extracurricular activities to fulfill the after-hours gap. In the term of emotional supports, both family and elderly would benefit by living in a close proxy to each other. For instance, researches recently point the significant improvement in the psychological well-being of senior citizens who move from community places to their families. It is worth to notice that adults and children would also satisfy emotionally markedly by having their loved ones at home.
In conclusion, although recently community places become more convenient to live for the elderly, this essay believes that, despite the challenges, advantages of living with family outweigh its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: hiring
...res. In this case, parents do not force to hire a nanny for their long working hours or...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing with family outweigh its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3282208589 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82480030833 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3654588463 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37616169606 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137573681328 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826126610137 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244550760955 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897383489724 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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