Dear Sir or Madam ;
I am writing this letter to express my interest about your recent advertisement in local magazine I am living in Australia since two years ago and I am a study child care in National University I am very Interest to take care of children because they are very innocent and a smart especially in age 6.
Although, I am a study in university I have lots of free time to spend with your children, so I can help your children to learn science subject in addition I have experience in working with children Because are used to be a kindergarten teacher and I know how to take care of them.
However, I am a student in university but this semester I have free time to work on my proposal so spending time with your kid could be wonderful experience for both of us And I have just two classes this semester so I can stay with your children five days a week and I hope you except me in your family.
I am waiting for your answering.
sincerely yours
Sogol Hassani
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? 56
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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...ing for your answering. sincerely yours Sogol Hassani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31351351351 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61767783596 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.44721803 44.8134815571 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.6 76.5299724578 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.0 16.8248392259 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138432030247 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802263445867 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029461212622 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916538410908 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218121722118 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 8.37731958763 208% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.31 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.