Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is becoming a trend that people like to shop online from different website available on Internet, such as, Amazon, which is one of the famous e-commerce site in many countries. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will first outline some advantages and explain why there are more advantages of online shopping and then present a disadvantage as why Internet is encouraging people to buy more by using good marketing techniques and strategies.
Some people think that buying things online such as flight tickets, academic books and even grocery shopping would help them to save time. People now live in nuclear families; hence, they do not get time to go for grocery shopping as both, husband and wife, work and have a full-time job. So, to cook on time is a big relief for them. For example, women are more focused to careers. However, it has been seen in past that women used to go for grocery shopping zo that she could cook. But, today women tend to look for online options to get grocery at home by saving time and energy.
Other than that, online shopping gives many options to buy items, such as, books. Buying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a lesser price. Due to cash on delivery option, one does not even has to go to anyone's doorstep or to a shop to buy a book. For example, while I was in the U.S. on my exchange program, I was totally new in the city and did not know much about the city. I bought a book from the webite easily. On the other hand, it is not necessary that people show the true picture of their products or services they are offering online. But, in most of the cases, the e-commerce takes this matter seriously and carefully verifies these sellers. For instance, on AliBaba.com, each and every seller has to be verified. Moreover, after each sale, usually buyers give reviews to sellers and the product they buy. Also, there are tons of platform on Social Media where one can write about any problem they face while buying online.
To conclude, online shopping is a great innovation for people who work full-time. It saves time and cost at the same time. While, the drawback of not seeing the original products mat create some problem. Hence, most of the times, online shopping is a smooth experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ying a book online has made life easier as one can find even a used book at a less...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...h on delivery option, one does not even has to go to anyones doorstep or to a shop ...
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Line 13, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t saves time and cost at the same time. While, the drawback of not seeing the origina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32746596599 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543062200957 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7399999919 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1739130435 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201068615112 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055766326876 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481613985599 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121022564624 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680756866806 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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