The given diagram explains the life cycle of silkworm and the various stages involved in the production of silk. Overall, there are mainly 4 stages are involved in the formation of moth and from cocoon the is silk cloth is obtained.
In the first stage eggs are laid on the mulberry leafs, the leafs feed the eggs ad from larva after 10 days. The silk worm larva is hatched from the leaf . After 4-6 weeks the larva is covered by a silk thread, within 3-8 days a cocoon is produced. After 16 days an adult moth individual is obtained.
For the production of silk cloth a pure cocoon is select and put it in the boiling water. The cocoon is taken from the water and unwind to produce thread wit a length of 300-900 m. In the final stage is either twisted and put in the dye or it is weaved and put in the dye to produce a silk cloth of desired color.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The given diagram explains the life cycl...
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... cocoon the is silk cloth is obtained. In the first stage eggs are laid on the ...
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... the mulberry leafs, the leafs feed the eggs ad from larva after 10 days. The silk w...
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...silk worm larva is hatched from the leaf . After 4-6 weeks the larva is covered by...
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..., within 3-8 days a cocoon is produced. After 16 days an adult moth individual is obt...
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... an adult moth individual is obtained. For the production of silk cloth a pure ...
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...her twisted and put in the dye or it is weaved and put in the dye to produce a silk cl...
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...produce a silk cloth of desired color.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2012195122 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10597122112 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518292682927 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4500669005 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296516741395 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126997971082 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14728045086 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222996083202 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163294176494 0.0819641961636 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.08 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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