The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.
The bar charts or column charts illustrates railway and travelling by train in six capital cities in Europe; paris, Stockholm, Lisbon, Rome, Madrid and berlin. it is clearly observed that the data represented by chart reflect insightful and interesting fluctuations. As can be seen, paris has longest railway and Madrid has shortest railway.
According to the graph, while paris has longest railway, Lisbon has most traveler, which paris has about 390 kilometers railway and Lisbon has 150 kilometers railway, however, paris has about 560 millions travelers per year and Lisbon has about 1900 millions travelers per year. In addition, Madrid and berlin both term of railway and number of passengers are the same, railway in Madrid is about 20 kilometers and it in berlin is about 35 kilometers. Moreover, Stockholm both in term of railway and number of passengers is average. Eventually, Rome average level of railway system and low level of passengers per year, which role has about 120 kilometers railway and it has about 35 millions of passengers per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...kholm, Lisbon, Rome, Madrid and berlin. it is clearly observed that the data repre...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the longest'.
Suggestion: has the longest
...ing fluctuations. As can be seen, paris has longest railway and Madrid has shortest railway...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the shortest'.
Suggestion: has the shortest
...n, paris has longest railway and Madrid has shortest railway. According to the graph, whi...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the longest'.
Suggestion: has the longest
... According to the graph, while paris has longest railway, Lisbon has most traveler, whic...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'traveler' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: traveler
...e paris has longest railway, Lisbon has most traveler, which paris has about 390 kilometers r...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '35 million'.
Suggestion: 35 million
...120 kilometers railway and it has about 35 millions of passengers per year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17441860465 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67499361867 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1701578955 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283317756234 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134430103745 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819893480648 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233579559357 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518536781718 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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