Students are more interested in politics than they were in the past. (Agree/Disagree)
With the globalization, people care aboutin politics more than they did in the past, and not only about politics of theirfor own country but also that of other countries. Education changes the thoughts. In the past, students should not were not encouraged to participate in politics., Ttheir only work is study. But now, the whole world is totally different. , Eeducation should include politics, so students are more interested in politics.
First of all, with the progressive technology development, students can get politicals information conveniently. Throughout various social media, students can obtain political news and information easily, absorb and digest those materials to build their own perspectives. For instance, students use Instagram and Facebook often. News channels or political parties will post articles on those media, which can attractach students the most. Hence, students are exposed tocontact politics frequently and that will increase their interest.
Furthermore, our society becomes more friendly to any statement and respect others’ opinions. Students have courage to express their opinions loudly. Besides, the school teaches students to use their rights to supervise the Government. Only if you join/get involved in/care about in politics can, you have the rights to change.
Of course, some people may disagree with my position in this matter. They may think that I am wrong. However, I think that my viewpoints are strong enough to support my idea.
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Suggestion:
...udents are more interested in politics. First of all, with the progressive techn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, i think, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 226.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60619469027 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8333012743 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7422509749 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5294117647 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2941176471 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342118763577 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857565748876 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691909007449 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167509862519 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103536313056 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.37 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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