Process make ethanol from corn

Essay topics:

Process (make ethanol from corn)

the diagram illustrates how ethnol fuel is produced from corn , first they get the corn to storing and then they milled it after that they cooked added water for about 4 hours and they fermenting that about two days , after two days they get it into the separating machine and separated that in two ways , one ways it for solid by-product creat when they was separated and the other ways it be transporting from liquid to the stored which is the large iron box take about 5 hours finally they get it and tranporting to the ethnol station

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2020-01-18 Nguyễn Việt Hoàng 34 view
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the diagram illustrates how ethnol fuel is ...
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Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es how ethnol fuel is produced from corn , first they get the corn to storing and ...
^^
Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and they fermenting that about two days , after two days they get it into the sep...
^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g machine and separated that in two ways , one ways it for solid by-product creat ...
^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one way', 'a way', or simply 'ways'?
Suggestion: one way; a way; ways
...achine and separated that in two ways , one ways it for solid by-product creat when they...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...hey was separated and the other ways it be transporting from liquid to the stored ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 437.0 965.302439024 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 98.0 196.424390244 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45918367347 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.14634628365 3.73543355544 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28255940632 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 58.0 106.607317073 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 130.5 283.868780488 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 98.0 22.4926829268 436% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 437.0 112.824112599 387% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 98.0 22.9334400587 427% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 5.23603664747 458% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814483332288 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814483332288 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814483332288 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.6 13.2329268293 367% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.61 61.2550243902 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 10.3012195122 369% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.06136585366 137% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.5 11.4329268293 477% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.2 10.9970731707 375% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.0658536585 497% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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