Nowadays, students of the university studying in a foreign land as a part of their course have been increasing rapidly. Although students might spend a fortune while learning in another country, it will benefit them with a good quality education that will enable them to make a successful career. In my opinion, the cost of the degree is incomparable to the learnings of the course which will bring success in the future.
The quality of education in some countries abroad is phenomenal and it gives a competitive edge to the students. As a result, it grooms the students into becoming a better professional who is in demand in the industry and gets paid higher than the average students in one’s own country. For instance, those who graduated from Harvard University were paid higher and were more successful in India, than their peers who graduated locally. Hence, the value of a person studying abroad is often more than those in the home country mainly due to the better quality of education.
However, the cost of such programs is exceptionally high, and many students are not able to afford, leaving them no option other than taking an education loan. Such loan comes at a high-interest cost, which puts a lot of pressure on the young graduates to repay the loan. For example, a research study by The University of Edmonton confirmed that students who took a loan to support their studies often tend to take a job in the Government which provides them with stability and regular income to repay the loan. Thus, the students often search for a high paying job instead of starting their own venture. Even so, they are well paid and have a better future as compared to those who have a degree from a local university.
In conclusion, many students are increasingly moving to other countries as part of their study program. It is only apparent that the universities abroad have a superior value of their degrees, which enhances the ability to achieve success and growth in their career as well as life. In my opinion, the advantages of studying in a foreign country far outweigh the disadvantage such as the high cost of achieving it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83468834688 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67161943396 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485094850949 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6435917521 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298685459305 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1030734727 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959719390073 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194716403658 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106285431572 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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